Evenson writes very well. I like the part on pg. 56 where it talks about Rauch’s brother. It is describing what sort of person he is and isn’t. Saying he is the nervous type, but not the depressive type. He can be the psychotic type, but is not the suicidal type. All of these descriptions have imagery, and without actually saying what Evenson wants to say, it is being said.

Field’s writing is good, but definitely different from Evenson. Field writes everything in stanzas. Each stanza can stand alone, but read continuously, like it’s meant to be read, makes the story come alive. Field is very concentrated on detail. Imagery in every stanza. No word is overlooked. They all show some feeling.