First, I want to start by saying her accent is really cool. I really liked how she compared things. Saying things like the rough, smooth, hard foot of the humanimals, like the goat man or the wolf man. Things that shouldn’t be compared together, she puts together, and they sound great. Maybe it’s because the way she read it, with her accent, made everything pop out a bit more.
All she did was read from her work, but it was a performance. It didn’t just feel as if I was being read to as a child, but spoken to with her use of incredible language. As she would read, she threw her book tabs over the podium, and they fell to the floor with glamour. I really liked the way the woman who was in our class the other night introduced Bhanu. She read a piece that set the mood for Bhanu’s reading. She spoke of depression like we did the other night in class as well, and how writing is so much different than typing. She described the feeling of when writing with a pencil on paper, your hand can pop up just for an instance, a million thoughts could run through your brain, and then like nothing happened, you continue to write.
good. say more. give more examples. 8/10
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